Corr.model eindex. Engels

Correctiemodel Eindexamen VWO Engels -- Schooljaar 2014- 2015

 Per vraag kunnen maximal 10 punten worden gescoord: 1 basispunt + 9 punten voor het antwoord

 De score is 130 : 13 = 10

 Voor een inhoudelijk foutief antwoord wordt 1 basispunt per vraag toegekend

 Grammaticale en idiomatische fouten : -1 punt

 Spelfouten : -1/2 punt

 Toevoeging niet-relevante statement : -2 punt

 Volledig letterlijk antwoord : -7 punt

Er wordt nooit meer dan de helft (4,5 punt) aan grammatikale, idiomatische en spelfouten afgetrokken voor een antwoord dat inhoudelijk wel goed is en niet letterlijk uit de tekst is overgenomen.

TEXT I :

Global Movement Against Child Marriage Grows Stronger

1. The risks are : Higher rates of HIV , illiteracy, death and pregnancy before the mother’s body is fully developed ( 3 x 3p)

2. Mozambique is one country that is taking measures domestically because of the efforts of women’s rights advocates and because Mozambique is poised to undergo rapid economic development. (2 x 4,5 p)

3. No ( 2 p). It is tradition and economic necessity ( 2 x 4,5 p)

4. The irony in paragraph 6 is that child marriage is illegal in Mozambique but it is not punishable by law ( 3p) because civil legislation is weak and the practice is informal (2 x 3p)

5. For the first time in history women’s rights and child’s right movements are coming together to make a joint stance on child marriage. ( 9 p)

Text II: Hell In Hellas

6. The contrast is: Less than a year she was running a small ouzo bar that she owned and now she is jobless, out of money and everything she owns is stuffed in one bag (OR: she lives in the streets) ( 9 p)

7. The contradiction is that the country is facing default even after over a year of painful austerity measures that have squeezed its citizens and stalled its already weak economy

but international lenders say that the country is not trying hard enough to reform its economy and rein in spending. ( 9p)

8. The irony is that a man (Spyros Yannatos) says that he has always followed the rules (paid his taxes) but that his country is rewarding him by bankrupting him. (9p)

9. The cathedral is named after the saint of compassion and now the priest listens to stories of despair (4,5p) and serves meals to the hungry every day. ( 4,5 p) ( and hands out care packages filled with flour, rice, oil and beans)

Text III:

Indonesia

Virginity Tests” Run Amok

10. It was not surprising because the Indonesia police have imposed these abusive and degrading tests on thousands of female applicants since as early as 1965. (9p)

11. The education chief (HM Rasyid) sought to impose mandatory virginity tests on female high school students but he was attacked he said that he had been misquoted by domestic media. (9p)

12. The tests have been recognized internationally as violations of the right to

non-discrimination AND the prohibition against “cruel, inhuman(e) or degrading treatment” under international human rights treaties that Indonesia has ratified. (2 x 4,5p)

13. Forbidding “virginity tests” (by local government as well as the Indonesian military, police, and civil service) and firing and prosecuting officials who promote or perpetrate “virginity tests”. ( 3 x 3 p)

aanvulling op het correctie model:

Ten aanzien van Text III vraag 11:

Namelijk de tweede contradiction in line 11 tot en met line 16 :

Rasyid, education chief sought to impose the mandatory “virginity tests” on female high school students to tackle perceived problems of “premarital sex and prostitution”, but Indonesian civil society organizations attacked Rasyid’s proposal as “ against human rights” and the then-Indonesian Education Minister Mohammad Nu skewered the idea as “degrading and discriminatory.”